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Richard Parry's avatar

This is a pretty powerful piece.

“We can’t live by ‘what ifs’ all the time” is a great line.

I do wonder what this would be like if it was stretched into a longer novella; I feel it’s the kind of rekindled family that could do quite well out there in the world (obviously, I don’t want to volunteer you for a huge amount of extra work 🤣 just, it struck me the idea in long form would be quite enticing!).

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Lucius Tarquinius's avatar

Very nice work. I'm glad I took the time out to finish reading it

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